In addition, the editing was nonexistent! The narrator did several retakes in most, if not all the stories (I haven't gotten to the end yet, not sure I will,) As someone who does a good amount of writing for a living, I felt the author did limited, if any, character development the writing was rather stilted and mechanical, and again, after listening to one story, you pretty much heard them all. Taken by themselves, without being in a collection, they could pass as an ok set of short stories, but when combined into a complete product, they present a redundant collection of one set of characters' experiences, only with different names. The author basically wrote the same stories over and over. It started out well enough, but after a while, the stories were pretty much the same, only the names were changed and the scenery. ![]() Given that there is not much in the way of gay erotic fiction, I was looking forward to this collection.
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